Pretty good for a first try, Pretty good shot set up for a first timer, one tip: use the fancy transitions sparinly, maybe some more variety eg. railing berms, power slides (especialy with the quad):) use diferent shots (close, wide,master) maybe some dialogue to break the action. Although it was like I said pretty good for a first try I know my first films were worse. take my criticisims with a grain of salt, I do not know how but if I could UPLOAD one of my dirtbike films (I have made streetbike and Ski films and some documentaries for my friends), it is 35mins so I know dial uppers would not like that. Good Job none the less! :) keep it up!