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GETMETOCA

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I wonder if the MX-Tech website will pop up for your readers every time they read the word suspension :)

Hey, when's the next chapter!!!!!! :rotfl:
 

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dirtbike_freak said:
Chapter 22
They talked to Josh and his father until they were at the front of the line and signed up. The conversation made the heat and long wait a bit

Cabot did make a good point that it ended mid sentence... was that accidentaly where you split the chapter, or did the post cut you off after so many words? Or were you just trying to leave us in suspense some more :bang:
 
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I think i missed that part when I coppied and pasted.

Oh by the way, scooter, could you proof read chapter 23 after i've finished it?
 

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sorry for the late reply, but sure, I can proof it for you.
 

stumanarama

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i only found three or so typos, good stuff, your english teacher should be proud(and giveyou an A)
 

150rguy

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stumanarama said:
i only found three or so typos, good stuff, your english teacher should be proud(and giveyou an A)
His english teacher thinks he had no writing talkents :yikes:
 
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Sorry guys, It's not done, but it will be soon. I've been focusing a lot on school lately. I want to get a 4.0 this quarter!
 

GETMETOCA

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OMG, the perfect kid!!! Good for you. We'll be here when you're ready with the next installment.
 

Crunch

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I just recently started reading this thread. I'm on chapter 10. Great story! I look forward to the rest.
 

150rguy

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kx125412 said:
What's going on man! Where's the rest of the story.
he has been sick like the past week so he's just been sitting at home, so I would think he would have it done. He just wants to annoy everyone by waiting a little longer.
 

d37kas

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Well......where is it? I haven't been to this site for a while, and I got on here hoping I'd have a couple chapters to read or something....and nothing?? ;) Oh well. Hope he's feeling better!
 

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nope :nener:
 

scooter1130

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should be very soon
 
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