washington_rider
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olderndirtmom said:
lol and people say that redneck dirtbike riders are uninteligent :laugh: :nener:
olderndirtmom said:J-man that's great. It's that kind of re-reading that helps authors have continuity within the story. Tightening things up strengthens the tale and lends credibility. It is attention to little touches that suck us into forgetting the story is "made up"... We start engaging ourselves in the character's lives. That is what the best storytellers are able to accomplish.
Dirtbike_freak is priviledged to have such an attentive audience.
He grately appreciates feedback.You are raising the bar for db_f. Very cool. :cool:
I'd love to have such a discerning AND faithful audience. Any artist would be very grateful. Thank-you. Scooter's gonna take the next round of proofing, so we'll be expecting him to go back and reread and check for those things... Right Scooter? ;)
Scooter??
150rguy said:Sweet sponsorhouse page :cool: . I had to tell you that here since you dont ever get on AOL anyomore
hmm interesting thought, he can add some killer ground hogs that pop up on the track and chase the racers :laugh:052zy40 said:you may one day be the Stephen King of MX.
Just for that I'm not gonna post it for a day after the original day I was gonna :fft: As a matter afact I think I;ll quit writing this story :yikes:crkid33 said:aint tryin to be pushy or nothin but...WHENS THE NEXT CHAPTER :nener:
personally I would rather be the J K Rawlings of MX, she is the first author to become a billionaire from writing books.052zy40 said:you may one day be the Stephen King of MX.
scooter1130 said:personally I would rather be the J K Rawlings of MX, she is the first author to become a billionaire from writing books.
harry potter OTPJD_MXRacer said:wat movie u talkin about
:yikes: :yikes: :yikes: :yikes: I go atleast 3 times a month!scooter1130 said:, I havent been to the movies in probably 15 -20 years.
I'm broke.scooter1130 said:I am also taking donations, the more money I get, the faster I will proof it, and the rest of you can read it... I dont know why olderndirtmom never took advantage of this :laugh:
scooter1130 said:I am also taking donations, the more money I get, the faster I will proof it, and the rest of you can read it... I dont know why olderndirtmom never took advantage of this :laugh:
you dont have to donate, just the people who want to read it. And don't worry, I'll split the profits with you.dirtbike_freak said:I'm broke.
Who else wants to be a proofer? :laugh:
me? mess up? :joke:olderndirtmom said:Thank you Dan for taking over.
Now don't mess it up. ;)
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